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WRITING TASK 2
Write about the following topic:
Concerning the issue of social media's paying too much attention to celebrities' private lives and relationships, it is believed that these social platforms should report more about ordinary people's lives instead of famous people. As far as i am concerned, i am in favor of the statement for several reasons which will be given out in this essay.
On the one hand, it can be said with certainty that the media should pay greater attention to ordinary people rather than celebrities. The key explanation is possibly because the media focuses on celebrity gossip so much that they often forget about the talented ordinary people and people that contribute to our society — such as teachers, doctors and scientists. Moreover, reporting on ordinary people can encourage others to work hard and inspire them to contribute more to the community. For instance, many doctors and volunteers during the COVID-19 pandemic risked their lives to save others, so the media should spread their marvelous sacrifice and great contribution to our society.
On the other hand, a special consideration of this case is that celebrities also contribute to society through charity work and positive influence, so the media should report about their meaningful activities. Some celebrities such as singers donate money for charity organizations and help raise community’s awareness about important issues by speaking up in cultural events and talk shows on live.
In conclusion, although reporting on celebrities can sometimes bring positive social impact, I strongly believe that the media should reduce the attention given to their private lives and focus more on ordinary people whose actions truly benefit society.
